Friday 7 May 2010
Planning grade: 16/20
WWW:
Good proposal, analysis of films using key concepts, consideration of target audience and animate.
EBI:
Analysis of technical elements (camera, mise-en-scene and so on)
Language - in proposal you discuss dialogue under LANGAUGE but LANGUAGE is about the technical elements and how these communicate messages i.e. camera movement and shots, casting, costume, lighting and so on.
Use of VALS in discussing audience profile for your film
Good proposal, analysis of films using key concepts, consideration of target audience and animate.
EBI:
Analysis of technical elements (camera, mise-en-scene and so on)
Language - in proposal you discuss dialogue under LANGAUGE but LANGUAGE is about the technical elements and how these communicate messages i.e. camera movement and shots, casting, costume, lighting and so on.
Use of VALS in discussing audience profile for your film
Production grade: 40/60
Film: 27/40
Proficient technical skills, some small errors and mistakes
Poster: 8/10
Very good, move date up as discussed
Radio advert: 5/10
Proficient technical skills, some small errors and mistakes
Poster: 8/10
Very good, move date up as discussed
Radio advert: 5/10
radio advert 5/10
Good idea but issues with editing - it doesn't run smoothly. Also issues with quality of voice recording - you may need to do this in a music department studio for better quality. Also consider adding sound from the film - convention.
Evaluation Feedback: 17/20
Great, well done. Excellent understanding of conventions, audience, marketing and use of new media.
Excellent choice of form for presentation of media.
Good skill in creation of podcast.
EBI:
Some sound interference from mobile phone and some sounds editing issues.
Excellent choice of form for presentation of media.
Good skill in creation of podcast.
EBI:
Some sound interference from mobile phone and some sounds editing issues.
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