Coursework grade: 73/100 (B)

Well done.

Planning grade: 16/20

WWW:
Good proposal, analysis of films using key concepts, consideration of target audience and animate.
EBI:
Analysis of technical elements (camera, mise-en-scene and so on)
Language - in proposal you discuss dialogue under LANGAUGE but LANGUAGE is about the technical elements and how these communicate messages i.e. camera movement and shots, casting, costume, lighting and so on.
Use of VALS in discussing audience profile for your film

Production grade: 40/60

Film: 27/40
Proficient technical skills, some small errors and mistakes
Poster: 8/10
Very good, move date up as discussed
Radio advert: 5/10

radio advert 5/10

Good idea but issues with editing - it doesn't run smoothly. Also issues with quality of voice recording - you may need to do this in a music department studio for better quality. Also consider adding sound from the film - convention.

Evaluation Feedback: 17/20

Great, well done. Excellent understanding of conventions, audience, marketing and use of new media.
Excellent choice of form for presentation of media.
Good skill in creation of podcast.

EBI:
Some sound interference from mobile phone and some sounds editing issues.

Planning for Poster, Image concept

I researched conventional Film Posters and took this into consideration when selecting an image to put at the forefront of my poster. A film poster that i could really relate to is the "Good Will Hunting" poster which i found relevant to my own as the storyline conveys two different individuals, who are friends.

Below is the "Good Will Hunting" poster which had a massive influence on my poster idea, and inspired me to create a poster in the in which I did. I liked the natural effect of the two characters in the foreground, embracing in conversation and expressing emotion towards each other as peers.

Planning of Radio Advert

I researched conventional Radio Adverts, and planned my own according to this. I tried to include as many conventions as possible which you will see through the development of my Draft/Script.